My dog jake matters to me because he was are family pet and i would always see him when i get how from school.
My grandparents matter to me because they are aways there for me and the give me joy in life and the just help with anything like school life lessons old war storys that my grandpa was in.
Hunting matters to me because i have been doing it since i was five years old and its just fun to shot a gun once in a while.
My brother Tyler matters to me because he is helpful like to hang out with me and he is just a fun guy to be around like he is funny, smart and he nows how to cook a good meal.
Lastly my parents the matter to me because the are there no matter what if i need help they are there and they never let me down they are the coolest parents that i ever could have they are just cool
Connor-
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